solid air
pressure imbalance
chest expands
inside hands
digging outward, escaping
offering my heart
breathing and the promise of human sacrifice (20171101)
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This has your style stamped all over it. The short form suits it. I like this.
Thank you, Jane. It certainly forces you pare it down to the bare minimum.
Sometimes that’s all you need.