half a moon (20160909)

no temple bells ring
small courtyard and half a moon
incense drifting in

Published by crow

I'm a writer and a dabbler. I live in Southern California. View all posts by crow

Poet Rummager September 9, 201610:56 pm

Mystic and haunting. You’re getting so good with your haiku!
1. crow September 10, 20165:51 am
  
  Thank you! That means a lot since I know you love haiku. 😍
  1. Poet Rummager September 11, 20162:13 pm
    
    💝
robert okaji September 10, 20164:07 am

Wonderful! I love the movement from the specific “not there” to the incense. So much to consider in these brief lines. Well done.
1. crow September 10, 20165:54 am
  
  Thank you so much!
  1. robert okaji September 10, 20168:32 am
    
    You’re very welcome. It’s a striking poem.

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