you chant
a whispered music
your language a delcious
black dream of sweaty shadows
and the smell of sleepy skin
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floating and leaving no trace
you chant
a whispered music
your language a delcious
black dream of sweaty shadows
and the smell of sleepy skin
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just finished watching the first season of Netflix’s “Stranger Things” and this would fit in nicely. 😉
I’ll have to catch that show. I’ve heard good things about it.
it’s well-done riff off the early eighties and Steven King / Spielberg motifs (imho).
Well done, with the enjambment… “black dream of sweaty shadows”
“delirious” still applies to it, but it’s strongly attached to “language,” thus “chant” and “whispered music,” lending a further air of mystique to them.
Thank you, my friend!
Mmm. Your words make me drowsy. How does sleepy skin smell?
Like salted caramel.
Really? That’s cool. I like salted caramel but always hated the calories. I’m gonna give this a try! I hope people don’t think I’m too weird licking my arm when I’m just about to nod off.
It only tastes like that if you luck someone else’s arm.
😛
I don’t think there’s a magnet of ‘feathers’. Shame. This is dark and mysterious enough though.
Thanks. We’ll have to fix that lack of magnetic feathers. 😄
Strange that they should have omitted such a crucial word.
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