walls (poem 20160517)

Posted on May 17, 2016May 17, 2016 by crow

who put this here
bricks
heads
bricks
fists
bricks
car
bricks
dreams
bricks
money
bricks
lust
bricks
wall
wall
wall
wall
look for a crack
in the mortar
a single point of light
wall

wall

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7 thoughts on “walls (poem 20160517)”

BRH May 17, 201611:36 pm

I’ve run out of superlatives for your work. Got it! This is superlative! I’m going to have ‘bricks’ echoing rhythmically around my head all day now.
1. Crow May 18, 20165:03 am
  
  Thanks! Sorry about the echo. Better than rocks I guess.
Bill Bisgood May 18, 201612:40 am

Yup, it’s a wall 😄
Merrie Skelley May 18, 20168:44 am

Excellent.
1. Crow May 18, 20168:44 am
  
  Thank you.
thefeatheredsleep May 18, 20168:48 am

Dear Crow. WOW! YOU SAID IT HERE! I love this! I want this on a T-shirt! I want this in a tattoo! This is a modern mantra to live by! What wisdom and truth ! Excellent, excellent!
Crow May 18, 20169:16 am

Wow, thank you so much. It might be a bit long for a tattoo. I’ve never put a poem on anything but paper before. T-shirt, huh? Hmm…

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