we walk and i place my
hands through you
as if you are a column of smoke
after all, blues skies are just
an effect of
rayleigh scattering
i’m waiting for a hologram
of you that is more
solid, fleshy and yielding
i want to see my fingers
sink into your skin
i want to make shadows on you
Shadows on you…..beautiful line.
Thank you. I’m not sure I like this poem very much, but I agree that’s a good set of words.
The shadows line in terrific!
Thanks!
Yes, gorgeous poetry, but the last line is stunning! xo
Well, you know I hate to argue, so Imma let you have your say. Thank you!