sea beast (20161010)

31 thoughts on “sea beast (20161010)”

1. The airborn kraken of an inverted sea… what a splendid image of those clouds.

   1. Thanks so much!

2. I liked the idea of wanting to abduct the mythological beast even with broken hands.

   1. Sometimes broken hands are all we have to work with…

3. “human arms
   broken hands
   quiet whispers”

   ~Awweee.. I’d take it anyway. 🙂 Great piece!

   1. Thank you very much! And thanks for stopping by!

      1. My pleasure. 🙂

4. i too long to abduct you
   like some mythological beast
   but i offer
   only human arms
   broken hands
   quiet whispers….love these lines

   1. Thank you. I’m glad you enjoyed it.

5. I think I’d rather have broken hands holding me, rather than tentacles any day! Let me lend you my ears to hear your quiet whispers. Lovely!

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6. A romantic sea beast in the clouds! I’d be more than happy with
   ‘only human arms
   broken hands
   quiet whispers’!

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7. but i offer
   only human arms
   broken hands
   quiet whispers

   How I love the tenderness of these lines ❤️ Beautifully penned.

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8. Poignant from the first wispy word. Lovely.

   1. Thanks! I don’t often get “lovely” to describe my writing. Thank you for swinging by.

9. Reaching for a connection with longing and it passes by on tendrils of what if.

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10. This is an excellent poem.

    1. Thank you! I’m glad you enjoyed it.

11. I love the first three lines and the tender finish

    1. Thank you. Even a sea monster needs love!

12. The idea of an airborne kracken has me smiling…or maybe a bit afraid!

    1. He just wants to be friends. 😀

13. Oh, good.

14. “some airborne kraken
    floating in an inverted sea”

    DELIGHTED by this. Thank you!

    1. I’m so glad! Thanks for visiting.

15. I admire the turn to the human side:

    but i offer
    only human arms
    broken hands
    quiet whispers

    Beautiful share ~

    1. Thank very much. I don’t always know where the human ends and the monster begins.

16. Chasing dreams, chasing clouds, perhaps beast and human can lend a helping hand…

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