after dark i sneak out the window
down an old oak that grows
next to my room
i smell apples in the breeze
soon we will all be
filling bushels, dreaming of pie
but tonight, it is still warm
or warm for here
and i button my flannel shirt
this town is filled with smiles
smiles on people
and walls, alleys, the abandoned
warehouse where they used to
ship out gag gifts
that smile has faded now
and i think about leaving
before the harvest
before i’m caught in apple dreams
i look up at the stars
and i only see stars
——
I like this visual, especially:
“this town is filled with smiles”
🙂
Thanks very much!
Wow. Very beautiful. Beautifully hollow.
Thank you!
Really captures the longing for something not quite yet defined. (K)
Thank you!
Most evocative!
Thank you.