we wind up
strangers with knowledge
of past lives
we wind up
like toys, both marching blindly
near the table’s edge
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floating and leaving no trace
we wind up
strangers with knowledge
of past lives
we wind up
like toys, both marching blindly
near the table’s edge
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Great use of the double use of “wind uo” connecting the two images perfectly, the image of the toys going off the table lingering – a perfect analogy
Thank you. I knew I wanted to get at least two uses of wind in there. If I can ever work up another stanza, maybe the wind will blow too.
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