Poem 20160210

through these trees
a cold river runs
flowing true
wearing light
bold fish stare holding your gaze
your feet splash–shivers

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Hey, it’s a twofer challenge!

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Published by crow

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Elusive Trope February 11, 201611:08 am

Superb. And a great rising from the prompt words.
crow February 11, 201611:09 am

Thank you.
the secret keeper February 14, 201612:39 pm

I love it. I can feel like I am floating with the river and experience the sensation of its motion. Extremely tactile. The shivers. Excellent.. Perfect with the words and écrite parfaitement! = jk
1. crow February 14, 201612:49 pm
  
  Wow, thank you so much. And thank you for the weekly prompts!
  1. the secret keeper February 14, 20163:13 pm
    
    The weekly prompts are fun and definitely challenging. I like to mix it up but some forms feel more familiar. I happy you take part. Your offerings are so original. I look forward to reading what you have written.
Jane Dougherty February 16, 20161:01 am

I don’t think I mentioned how much I liked this one!
1. crow February 16, 20166:01 am
  
  Thank you!
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merrildsmith February 16, 20163:54 am

Wonderful–especially the last two lines. I can see and feel that cold water!
1. crow February 16, 20166:02 am
  
  Thank you!