through these trees
a cold river runs
bold fish stare holding your gaze
your feet splash–shivers
Hey, it’s a twofer challenge!
The Secret Keeper
Weekly Writing Prompt #23
(5) Words: | STARE | RIVER | HOLD | TRUE | WEAR |
10 thoughts on “Poem 20160210”
Superb. And a great rising from the prompt words.
I love it. I can feel like I am floating with the river and experience the sensation of its motion. Extremely tactile. The shivers. Excellent.. Perfect with the words and écrite parfaitement! = jk
Wow, thank you so much. And thank you for the weekly prompts!
The weekly prompts are fun and definitely challenging. I like to mix it up but some forms feel more familiar. I happy you take part. Your offerings are so original. I look forward to reading what you have written.
I don’t think I mentioned how much I liked this one!
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Wonderful–especially the last two lines. I can see and feel that cold water!
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