Today’s challenge for day four of #NaPoWriMo–write a love poem without using the word love.
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it’s all in the eyes
not her eyes,
not the way she looks at me
or the the way her eyes catch the light
in the room
when she smiles
or the way a room becomes a chilly place
and dim
when she’s angry or sad
it’s all in the eyes
not her eyes,
not the way they follow
the rhythm of a story or joke
or lower
half-lidded
when made drowsy with desire
or the satiety of desire
it’s all in the eyes
but the eyes are mine
and they watch and they see
what shivers and trembles
they watch and they see
what moves and breathes
they watch and they see
what stretches and reaches
they watch and they see
every atom swirling
Fabulous. I particularly liked the rhythm. It seemed to keep time with tick of my clock.
Ha ha. That last stanza particularly. Thanks very much.
It sure did. Thanks for the follow.
You’re welcome!