the abandoned heart is beating
it struggles on, but not in spite,
or beating, rather, not to spite
but because it knows nothing else
dreading the silence of the night,
the abandoned heart is beating
to hear itself, steady rhythm
the only comfort it has left
cold darkness too, this loss of words,
a handful of half-told truths–though
the abandoned heart is beating
it will–can not beat forever
these days are soft sun-filled hours
and gray clouds hiding silent stars
that whisper, it is a lie that
the abandoned heart is beating
I love the contradictions in this, wrong-footing the assumptions the reader makes. Beautiful imagery.
I really, really like this!
Thanks very much. It’s the first time I’ve tried this type of poem. It made me work a little harder I think.
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